Story Web

Task description: Today I have completed my story Web. If you don’t know what a story Web is it’s where you do your work and where you tell about the story. Example if you read about Matariki you tell about the star’s are how many they are and the characters. Anyways here is my Story Web come check it out!

Writing T2W8

Task description: Today I have completed my writing and based of the writing the teacher gave us a photo and we had to write a story with that topic (photo) and here’s my story!

 One day a man named Jeremy woke out of bed. He was tired but got ready for work so he went and brushed his teeth with toothpaste. After brushing his teeth he went for a hot  and warm shower. After having his hot and warm shower he got his suit and walked to work someone said  behind him “good morning! Buddy!” Jeremy turned around and said “good morning to yo- WHAT A MONKEY LIKE YOU CAN TALK!” the monkey replied “of course i can i always talk why buddy?” Jeremy replied “WHAT! In this world we do not know what you’re saying and aren’t you supposed to say  OO OO AH AH?” “oo oo ah ah? what’s that? anyways my name is Larry can you help me find my two tiny sons. They have gone and my 2 other friends are trying to find him but they haven’t seen a sign of him can please find him for me” Jeremy hesitated and said “ok but where are your friends” Larry said “there in the jungle it’s a two hour walk from here” Jeremy said “What! Two hours oh my goodness” so Jeremy and Larry walked for 2 hours straight and finally made it to their destination.

 

Larry went to his friend’s Max who is a Lion and Mandy who is a Chipmunk Jeremy felt like he was about to pass out because Max the lion was huge and Jeremy was scared but Max came up to him and said “Who is he?” Larry said “Oh he’s with me he’s gonna help us find Simon” and Sammy Jeremy said “is that your son’s name?” Larry said “Yes but what are you guys standing there going to find them!” So Max and Mandy and Jeremy searched for the two son’s Jeremy yelled Simon and Sammy’s name for a long time and Mandy too, even max! And they couldn’t find them but there were two tiny monkeys talking about their missing dad and we got a closer look and then we found Simon and Sammy! So they ran to Larry and gave his son’s to him and he was very happy and he said “thank you so much guys and by the way Jeremy here’s a treasure full of gold” so Jeremy said “thank you so much this is gonna change my life!’ so Jeremy walked home with happiness and enjoyment but he just realised he had to walk back home and that will take him 2 hours but he lived happily ever after.

 

Maths T2W7 #2

Task description: Today I have finished my work about fractions and it was hard but I completed it and it took hard work and effort and I have learnt about improper fractions and not improper fractions and that’s what I learn anyways come check it out!

Writing W7

Task description: Today i have completed my creative writing. In Rm 6 literacy we had to write any story we like because a few weeks ago we learned about dialogue and in my writing the “dialogue task” helped me out so come check it out!

Once upon time there was a little boy named Garry who was playing rugby with his mate Jerry. Garry and Jerry were the best in the rugby team; they were just the dynamic duo. One time Garry and Jerry were in a game and they got lots of tries matter of fact the score was 103 to 28 and the coach was just mind blown. 

 

The coach asked “how are you both this good?!?!” he replied with a gentle voice “i think we both are just too good” and a few years later they got older and they retired from there team, over time they still play rugby. One time they were playing kicks on the field near their house and Garry kicked the ball to Jerry suddenly the ball hit a broken window. 

 

They were shocked and scared but they went to the door and knocked but no one answered but the door was unlocked so they peaked in and saw no one was there Garry said “jerry let’s go inside and try to find our ball” Jerry replied back with a scare “No! This house is too scary to look at. This house is black very tall, rubbish everywhere AND THE PLACE IT’S SCARY AND MATTER OF FACT ITS ABANDON AND WHAT IF GHOST ARE HERE!?!?!” Garry replied also and said “Don’t be a scaredy cat, it’s not scary, we just get in and get the ball!” Jerry replied back again and said “fine but if we die it’s your fault.” 

 

They both went in and Garry was fine but Jerry looked like he was about to poop his pants, he was shivering hard out! But they went in and tried to find the ball. While

finding the ball they heard bangs on the wall and scratches on the wall Jerry had enough of it so he ran outside and went home garry yelled “WHERE ARE YOU GOING!”

Jerry ignored him and ran home. Garry was all alone and kept finding the ball but it was nowhere to be found but suddenly he saw the ball in a dark hallway so he went and got the ball but then… A GHOST APPEARED Garry said “HOLY MOLY” so he ran to the door but it was locked he almost peed himself so he hid inside a dark and creepy closet the ghost was roaming around trying to find him but he couldn’t. Garry thinks of staying here until someone arrives but if he stays the chances of the ghost finding will be high so he had to find a key for him to escape. So he got out of the closet and try to find the key so he searched around the house and saw something gold “The Key!” yelled Garry so he got the key unlocked the door and ran home to safety. He went home traumatised.