Task description: Today i have completed my creative writing. In Rm 6 literacy we had to write any story we like because a few weeks ago we learned about dialogue and in my writing the “dialogue task” helped me out so come check it out!
Once upon time there was a little boy named Garry who was playing rugby with his mate Jerry. Garry and Jerry were the best in the rugby team; they were just the dynamic duo. One time Garry and Jerry were in a game and they got lots of tries matter of fact the score was 103 to 28 and the coach was just mind blown.
The coach asked “how are you both this good?!?!” he replied with a gentle voice “i think we both are just too good” and a few years later they got older and they retired from there team, over time they still play rugby. One time they were playing kicks on the field near their house and Garry kicked the ball to Jerry suddenly the ball hit a broken window.
They were shocked and scared but they went to the door and knocked but no one answered but the door was unlocked so they peaked in and saw no one was there Garry said “jerry let’s go inside and try to find our ball” Jerry replied back with a scare “No! This house is too scary to look at. This house is black very tall, rubbish everywhere AND THE PLACE IT’S SCARY AND MATTER OF FACT ITS ABANDON AND WHAT IF GHOST ARE HERE!?!?!” Garry replied also and said “Don’t be a scaredy cat, it’s not scary, we just get in and get the ball!” Jerry replied back again and said “fine but if we die it’s your fault.”
They both went in and Garry was fine but Jerry looked like he was about to poop his pants, he was shivering hard out! But they went in and tried to find the ball. While
finding the ball they heard bangs on the wall and scratches on the wall Jerry had enough of it so he ran outside and went home garry yelled “WHERE ARE YOU GOING!”
Jerry ignored him and ran home. Garry was all alone and kept finding the ball but it was nowhere to be found but suddenly he saw the ball in a dark hallway so he went and got the ball but then… A GHOST APPEARED Garry said “HOLY MOLY” so he ran to the door but it was locked he almost peed himself so he hid inside a dark and creepy closet the ghost was roaming around trying to find him but he couldn’t. Garry thinks of staying here until someone arrives but if he stays the chances of the ghost finding will be high so he had to find a key for him to escape. So he got out of the closet and try to find the key so he searched around the house and saw something gold “The Key!” yelled Garry so he got the key unlocked the door and ran home to safety. He went home traumatised.